Ghosts of past. Lingering shadows. Coffee Stains. Yellow newspapers. Lonely cobwebs. Dusty notebooks. Empty bottles. Cigarette butts. Unpacked cartons. Rotting fruits. Dirty dustbin. Broken glass. Rusty bed.
Footsteps. Door. Knock. Knock.
Creak.
Light. Bright.
Smell. Voice. You.
Illusion. Dream.
Life.
[Dedicated to the only reason of my existence.]
:) (:
ReplyDeletedirty room!
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ReplyDeleteWaah mere GALIB sir, kya khoob bya kiya hai jasbate-dil ko !!
ReplyDeleteHehe. Nice.
ReplyDeleteI see that the only reason for your existence liked this one. :D
brilliant! the best piece coming from you!
ReplyDelete@ devil: a lot tidier now! (:
ReplyDelete@ shourav: shukriya bhai!
ReplyDelete@ Gurdit: Yeah, she did. As a matter of fact, she wrote a similar piece and mailed as well!!
ReplyDelete@ aditya: thank you, boss!! means a lot. (:
ReplyDeletelooks like something is making Mr.galib nostalgic......can be called a MASTER PIECE :)
ReplyDeleteGreat..for a moment It reminded me of your room at hostel-E...just fits the description..:D
ReplyDeleteVery short as a description but means a lot......Liked it bhai !
ReplyDeletesuprising. short. cute.
ReplyDeletereboot!!!
for today's lifestyle mobile phone should also be there in the list :)
ReplyDeleteDude this one is the best Random thought from you till now :)
ReplyDeletedelete dat one. wil post it later.
ReplyDeleteno mobile fones. he hates talking.
ReplyDeleteThats a nice picture and would look classy in sepia.
ReplyDeleteah, i love this! great stuff!!
ReplyDelete@ Raj: Nostalgic, sure! But happy happy wala nostalgic (:
ReplyDelete@ Jai: Totally! :D
ReplyDelete@ Mukesh: Thanks, bhai! Glad! (:
ReplyDelete:O (: (:
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@ Sweta: Yaar the cell phone was totally dormant! Plus, there is the answer a couple of comments below yours.
ReplyDelete@ Ankesh: Thanks! (: Only, it wasn't really random this time! (:
ReplyDelete@ Mr. China: Won't even bother translating this time!
ReplyDelete@ devil: deleted! I talk more than you do, huh!
ReplyDelete@ Anita: 'Nice' picture!!!!! That's a nightmare, but yeah, pobably sepia would be more photogenic!
ReplyDelete@ Mehak: Happy! (:
ReplyDeletepromise of future.
ReplyDeletelogical thoughts.
addictive coffee fragrance.
wiki by heart.
lucky spider.
hangaroo.
full bottles.
cigarettes packs.
only eggs.
dustbins full of paper bits.
blog.
movies.
cricket.
well kept bed.
song.
music.
smile. bright.
you.
reality. life.
see i gave a better view of u.
reflects our view towards life.
i forgot cuteness.
ReplyDeleteJust one word, 'AWESOME'!
ReplyDeleteWOW!! :)
ReplyDelete@ Devil: Well, can anything be said in response?? You're my life and thanks for the same (: (: (:
ReplyDelete@ akansha: just one smiley (:
ReplyDelete@ being alive: :D all smiles, rather the state i'm in, all grins...not all to do with the comment...woo-the-fuckin-hoo!!
ReplyDeleteprofound....words striked right at heart...
ReplyDelete@ Chinese spammer: Chindia rocks!!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Saumya. I'm glad they did! (:
ReplyDeleteDifferent from your usual style,nice attempt :) Is this the post you were talking about?
ReplyDeletethank you, sir! trying to experiment (:
ReplyDeleteyes, this is the one!
i can visualise !!
ReplyDeletefinally some english from china, yay!
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ReplyDelete@ vicious: must be disgusting, eh
ReplyDeleteSomething different !! Nice...
ReplyDeleteWell, thanks!
ReplyDeleteRad. Picturesque. Keep the juices flowing.
ReplyDeleteI went into some nostalgia on reading this. I do not know who is more luckier - you or your girl. Congrats. Well-written. Different.
ReplyDelete请英语 请英语 请英语 请英语 !!!
ReplyDelete@ Akshhar: I wish! Almost dead though!
ReplyDeleteHappens! Definitely I am, brother. Thanks! (:
ReplyDeleteLiked the little devil's version more :D
ReplyDelete(: That feels even great!!
ReplyDeleteAh, you wince my soul with this. Lucky is the reason of existence.
ReplyDeleteVery touching.
(: (: Thanks, on her behalf as well! :P
ReplyDeletei can thank nilanjana myself.
ReplyDeletebtw... i m doomed. the only one lucky in this relationship is mangoman.
ask the ppl who knw him.
@dipa-thanx dear.
I know him. He's tearing his hair.
ReplyDeletei know him better.
ReplyDeletesince he has met me, his rate of tearing his hair has decreased.
p.s.-tearing his hair has been his altym problem.
A man of 40 words and what a gem!
ReplyDelete@ devil: Ya right! You ruined his life!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sapna! (:
ReplyDeleteAh, reminded me of my verses long back. A different way of putting things. Very well done.
ReplyDeleteVery very very cute. Soft and smooth and still so masculine. The right blend.
ReplyDelete@ Shyam Sir: Thanks, Sir. Why not share them?
ReplyDelete@ Prajakta: Ah, comments like this make my day
ReplyDelete! (:
Very effective and inspirational.
ReplyDeleteInspirational??
ReplyDeleteWords. Pictures. Life.
ReplyDeleteAwesomeness.
Read it. Loved it. Good.
ReplyDeleteThank. You.
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