Sep30 2010. Today's the verdict. Well, not the final one. But, it's got to be a milestone. The saffrons are there. The greensas well. Will they embrace white and thus complete the Tricolour regardless of the verdict or will they paint the land red? Time will tell, like it has always done in BR Chopra's Mahabharat.
In the meanwhile, what does that man have to say who, in all this hullabaloo around him, has ironically been pushed to the sidelines? He's called by various names. He's Rama, whose place of birth is as contentious as Lindsay Lohan's life. He's Rahim, whose dream of a blemish-free religion has been mercilessly stoned to death.
Probably this is what my God wants to scream out.
dafna do mujhe
chaurahe pe
kabr khod do meri
ya jalaa do
kuch sookhi lakdiyon ke saath
maar to tumne
kal hi diya tha
cheekha tha bahot
pehle
koshishein ki thi
samjhane ki
manaane ki
bataane ki
tum nahi samjhe
koi nahi samjha
ungliyan uthi
uthti rahi
bas
ab numaish mat karo
meri
mere nange jism ki
rooh toh rahi nahi
bahot pehle hi
chhod gayi
sikudi
simti
le jaao mujhe
daal aao kahin
apni is duniya se door
bahot door
waise bhi tumhari is duniya mein rakha kya hai??
Nice yaar, nice as usual. :)
ReplyDeletereally nice post...said it all in few words..
ReplyDeleteI'm sure god has already fled this duniya..:)..Nice poem, Intense..loved it!
ReplyDeletenice ...but i am so happy nothing like that happened ... i guess we have grown as a nation !!
ReplyDelete@ gurdit: thanks yaar, thanks as usual!!
ReplyDelete@ ankita: thanks! (: well, i tried!
ReplyDelete@ Ana_treek: Would differ! The poetic expression apart, I believe in Him and his plans for this world! Thanks! (:
ReplyDelete@ vicious: Well, nothing happened for sure! But had it been a SC verdict, things might have been uglier. I just hope till the time SC gives it ruling, the issue loses its potence.
ReplyDeletewow. this is great. exactly my sentiments and i think the sentiments of most young people out there... i can't believe how they can fight and maim and kill in the name of God, for the sake of God.
ReplyDeletethank god there were no violent reactions after the verdict.
thanks, mehak! (: thank god there were none!
ReplyDeleteback on blogspot after a long gap....must say once again u made my day...!!..
ReplyDeleteI wish he had screamed one in english too.. :D
ReplyDeleteThe last line of the 1st para..
The 1st time I read, I thought sookhi lakdiyon meant happy girls
And the 2nd time I read,I thought sookhi lakdiyon meant dry wood
I didn't read further :P
@Verdict
I think we have enough of masjids and mandirs,its time we built our nation :)
@ Raj: Glad you liked it man!!
ReplyDelete@ Dipa: :D :D :D :D
ReplyDeleteThis has gotta be the funniest thing I've come across in a while. "happy girls" is sukhi ladkiyan!! why would god want to be buried with happy girls!! he's god after all! awesome! still grinning!
Thoughtful and well written!
ReplyDeletethank you, nehha! (:
ReplyDeletenice one....we(INDIANs) came out clean..no differences exist..at least till the next verdict...
ReplyDelete:D hehe.. that proves I'm still bad at hindi.
ReplyDelete@ Jai: At least it seems so. (:
ReplyDelete@ Dipa: Well, not really! For a beginner, sukhi/sookhi and ladkiyan/lakdiyan would mean the same :D
ReplyDeleteThanks, Sushant. What's life without spice or sugar? And poetry is not meant to be understood. It's to be made sense of. I hope that made sense!
ReplyDeleteAwesome..!!
ReplyDeleteTruly you shape your composition making one voice for the thousands that are present in the crowd ..
But why don't you write that poetry in Hindi format will make it more emphasizing just suggesting rest is your wish.. :)
Thank you, Alcina. Felt nice.
ReplyDeleteIf you mean writing in metre and rhymes, well..I don't know...it just ruins the poetry of the emotions. It should just flow, unleashed. Thanks for taking interest. (:
Watch Prasoon Joshi on this matter on NDTV (Youtube). These bloodsucking politicians cannot let the world to be at rest. How will they make their moolah otherwise. Very well written, as usual.
ReplyDeleteJust like the one on Kashmir, you let life flow on paper again. Exception is the new usual.
ReplyDelete@ SFS: I know man, I've seen it! It's awesome! Totally!!
ReplyDelete@ abhishek: Thanks, man! Loved the line with exception :D
ReplyDeletehow true!! lovely read...that is, if I can call it "lovely"
ReplyDeletethanks divya! and welcome back!
ReplyDeleteBloddy blood sucking politicians are only ones to blame. We were living harmoniously before also. But the selfish people on the top made sentiments high of everyone.
ReplyDeleteProbably yes. But not entirely.
ReplyDeleteVEry succinct and very beautiful, bhaiya as usual. You ahve well captured what we all feel.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Akshhar. (:
ReplyDeleteWell written Varun. This is how our God must be feeling, helpless. I feel sorry for this country and I feel sorry for ourselves. What has the world come to?!
ReplyDeleteProbably. World sucks.
ReplyDeleteWaise bhi tumhari is duniya mein rakha kya hai...touched!
ReplyDeleteThanks, means a lot, every word of appreciation! (:
ReplyDeleteI loved the bit about the saffrons and greens and also the last lines. You're versatile to say the least. And a good human, too.
ReplyDeleteA humane touch of a good communicator. Touched.
ReplyDelete@ Prajakta: Thanks! (: Made my day!
ReplyDelete@ Shaym Sir: Thank you! (:
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